Rachel
I feel like you are taking a "rebel without a cause" approach to the way you disagree with David Banach's lecture. You are only including yourself in your examples in order to back up your argument. I would recommend to exclude yourself and give more general points of view. I also found it humorous that you assert David Banach is fake through his writing and imply he knows a lot of fakes
-Juan Soteldo
Hannah,
All your examples and ideas are very interesting to read. I like how you made connections to your personal experiences in things like your art and your defiance to your ex-boyfriend with reading the twilight series. I agree with Jace when he said that you were not acting in "bad faith", but instead challenging somebody to let them know that you are not under their control.
I'm really curious to know who in particular are the members of the so called "rain boot crew" hahaha
You mention that if people do not like what your wear, then "it's too bad for them". This shows that you have personality and you are not trying to be somebody else in order to fit in.
-Juan Soteldo
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